I am very disappointed with Mr. McDonough's website. As I critique the home page I must say that I am not sure where he is trying to take me and what he wants me to learn from his site. Do I want to learn more about him, or the cradle to cradle community (whatever that is)? My other options are his partners and the co-founder and principal. I need to be told what he wants me to view. Here I am lost, and I am not compelled to make a selection from any of the choices. Where are his projects, and published works?
Now, once one does come to the place where he or she makes a decision,; the website becomes exactly what it needs to be. In conclusion, the home page need some work done to it.
www.mcdonough.com
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